Blue Moon 5.2

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Blue Moon 5.2
Blue Moon
by Donna Lamb

Richard watched the tall redhead cross the parking lot with some interest. She'd let the big blond man off at the back door of the office building and driven the huge Mercedes SUV to park it in two parking spaces (it was that big) at the far end of the lot. Richard had taken the last oversize parking spot with the limo but he appreciated that she had gone far from the door before parking the German beast, thoughtfulness not often seen in the rich.

It also gave him more time to watch her walk. She had a long-legged style that actually made him think of Jo. Nearly the same height, taller in heels, slender but with more top and bottom than Jo, she wore her long hair in a thick red braid down the middle of her back. Richard enjoyed watching it swing. "Sweet mama," he said aloud since no one could hear him.

He'd just noted that she might be older than he had first thought -- maybe thirty-five or even forty, but that was no crime -- when it occurred to him that the big blond man had been Aronhaus. Without thinking about his sudden sense of urgency, he bolted from the limo and followed the redhead into the office building.

* * *

"Melody, isn't it? Do you need to sit down?" Larry asked.

Jo nodded and let herself be directed to the padded chair on the client side of the desk. "I don't w-w-w..." She paused, Larry waited patiently. "I don't w-work here?"

"No, dear, that would hardly be wise, do you think?"

She swallowed hard. What the hell is going on? she wanted to ask but restrained herself. "Did--did you know Joel?" she asked instead, wanting to find out what his co-workers thought of her former male self.

Larry nodded. "Very serious young man but he had a sense of humor."

I did? thought Jo.

"Of course," said Larry, "I'm a bit of a nerd, too. When he made a joke about growing tribbles to be made into toupees for bald starship captains, I knew what he was talking about."

Jo smiled, remembering. Larry and Joel had laughed about that one and the one about Klingon plastic wrap that couldn't be removed because after all, it wasn't called Kling-off.

Larry sighed. "I'm sorry you didn't get to know him."

Now what? thought Jo. If Joel was my brother, why wouldn't I know him?

* * *

"I'm not the only one that cheats, I see," said Sophie. She glared across at the seat at Ted the Clarence.

"You left her with no life, no existence in the world. It's not cheating to provide a minimal reality for her. And the memories of living people have not been changed back past the two month window you established, with one exception. And that one willingly, even prayerfully."

The Devil in Drag examined the life thread Ted indicated and snorted. "Well, that's no fun. Heartbreak into joy?"

Ted nodded. "Our stock in trade."

* * *

Richard caught up with the redhead in front of the elevators. He smiled at her and she smiled back. Once in the elevator he said, "I hope you don't mind my asking, but what is that scent you're wearing?" He knew enough not to call it a perfume.

She laughed. "Want some for your girlfriend? It's called 'Mille et Une', from France."

He whistled. "Expensive?"

She nodded. "Pretty much."

He grinned at her, "Oh well. But I'd go as high as one hundred dollars for a half ounce. Of perfume, that is."

She looked at him. "It's only seventy. That's some girlfriend."

Richard nodded, sighing. "Yeah, she is," he said.

The doors opened on the third floor. "She's a lucky girl," the redhead said.

He grinned again, holding the door for her. "Let's hope she thinks so."

He followed her down the hall, until she looked back.

"I'm going to Assemblyman Aronhaus's office," he explained.

"What a coincidence, I'm Cherie Aronhaus and so am I."

He nodded and moved ahead of her to hold the office door. "I'm Richard," he said.

* * *

Larry looked at Jo and frowned. "Did you have a purse?" he asked.



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Okay, you really surprised me here! (Spoiler Alert!!)

So ... let's see if I got this:

Sophie turned Joel into a girl, then killed Joel to everyone and left Jo with no existence. Soooo, um, the ... well, you know ... HIM ... created the identity of Melody, Joel's sister who is the girlfriend of his married boss. Divinely sanctioned adultery?

Very inspired, Donna. It's so ... wicked ... yet uplifting.

Sincerely,

Scott

~If a person had time enough, he could love all of that majority who are decent and just.~
Lazarus Long
Robert A. Heinlein's 'Time Enough for Love'

Sincerely,

Scott

Calvin: You can't just turn on creativity like a faucet. You have to be in the right mood.
Hobbes: What mood is that?
Calvin: Last-minute panic.

Close

But I don't think the Clarence-in-Chief had anything to do with the possible adultery, that looks like the devil's handiwork. What Sophie is complaining about seems to be the Mom connection? Maybe?

- Erin

Hmm, I don't think the devil did it this time (MORE SPOILERS!!)

Ted said:

"You left her with no life, no existence in the world. It's not cheating to provide a minimal reality for her. And the memories of living people have not been changed back past the two month window you established, with one exception. And that one willingly, even prayerfully."

If Sophie left her with no existence in the world, how could she be responsible for the affair? The devil intended for her to have no identity at all.

I think Mom is obviously the one who willingly and prayerfully had her memories altered, because she would have to have them changed back to Melody's birth.

Sincerely,

Scott

~If a person had time enough, he could love all of that majority who are decent and just.~
Lazarus Long
Robert A. Heinlein's 'Time Enough for Love'

Sincerely,

Scott

Calvin: You can't just turn on creativity like a faucet. You have to be in the right mood.
Hobbes: What mood is that?
Calvin: Last-minute panic.

I think you're reading into the wrong part

No existence, I think means no legal existence, no identity or history in the world.

And yes, Mom is the one who had memories altered. Hmm? Has it been said what happened to Joel's dad?

You realize that it would take Jo fifteen minutes to say M-Melody M-Messenger?

- Erin

We'll have ta see :)

The 'minimal reality' part suggests to me she had no place in reality, but only Donna knows for sure. :)

The only reference I recall about Joel's father is this:

A cheap chest of drawers with neat family pictures on top, a younger, male Joel in a graduation gown standing between a proud older couple who looked more like grandparents than parents.

It sounds like Joel was born late in his parents' lives, so it's possible his father may have already passed away.

Sincerely,

Scott

~If a person had time enough, he could love all of that majority who are decent and just.~
Lazarus Long
Robert A. Heinlein's 'Time Enough for Love'

Sincerely,

Scott

Calvin: You can't just turn on creativity like a faucet. You have to be in the right mood.
Hobbes: What mood is that?
Calvin: Last-minute panic.

Legalisms?

I'm plotting this with a magic 8-ball, y'know. ::grin::

And maybe she has a different last name. Like M-Melody P-Patterson. :grin:

Donna Lamb, flack

Donna Lamb, flack

What I want to know

is how Jo could have a brother and not him? I'll buy the prayerful one being Mom but how did she end up with Joel's old boss if she never even knew Joel? Not to mention I'm curious about the 'boyfriend' angle too. That sounds more like Sophie's kind of work.

Yay! It's Richard to save the day! Why am I not surprised that Jo left her purse outside where the 'wife' can see it. I did have an odd idea. What if Jo was a half-sister? Or ever if our dear Mr. Aronhaus was Jo and Joel's real father? Nah! doesn't work. Even if he was pretending Jo was his girlfriend to keep his daughter a secret he nailed Jo right on the lips. Not something a father would do. Darn, thought I was onto something. There is still a lot we don't know like just how young is she now? Mom did sound awfully concerned.
Great stuff Adonna!
Hugs!
grover

Plan? Ain't got no Plan!
"Beyond Thunder Dome"

Plan? Ain't got no Plan!
"Beyond Thunder Dome"

Maybe....

Melody is a half-sister...

I have a really detailed explanation of how this would work but I don't want to spoil things for Donna if I'm even close to right.

Sincerely,

Scott

~If a person had time enough, he could love all of that majority who are decent and just.~
Lazarus Long
Robert A. Heinlein's 'Time Enough for Love'

Sincerely,

Scott

Calvin: You can't just turn on creativity like a faucet. You have to be in the right mood.
Hobbes: What mood is that?
Calvin: Last-minute panic.

Go, grover!

Aronhaus as Melody's dad is just way the heck out there. ::grin::

Donna Lamb, flack

Donna Lamb, flack

Not a Homerun?

I'm guessing Adonna that when you said,"Way the heck out there." it wasn't a Homerun? Actually I trying to reconcile how Melody's background as provided by Clarence ended up with her being Aronhaus's girlfriend. Heck even I admitted it doesn't fit the available evidence. The Half-sister relation seems plausible, but another reason she could have been an unknown is if she had been 'institutionalized' recently released and or recovered from a coma ect... Think Hoffman in "Rainman". That would explain why she wouldn't know Joel and why MOM was so concerned about her.
Thanks Adonna for such an entertaining tale. :)
Hugs!
grover

Plan? Ain't got no Plan!
"Beyond Thunder Dome"

Plan? Ain't got no Plan!
"Beyond Thunder Dome"

I try to be surprising

not shocking. ::grin::

Next section later today or tonight. :smile:

Donna Lamb, flack

Donna Lamb, flack

Good job of guessing, Scott

Close but no cigar ::grin::

Donna Lamb, flack

Donna Lamb, flack

Guessing??

That was pure deductive reasoning, my dear. Okay, maybe wrong ... but it was very deductive and really, really ... pure.

I look forward to seeing just how close I was. :)

Sincerely,

Scott

~If a person had time enough, he could love all of that majority who are decent and just.~
Lazarus Long
Robert A. Heinlein's 'Time Enough for Love'

Sincerely,

Scott

Calvin: You can't just turn on creativity like a faucet. You have to be in the right mood.
Hobbes: What mood is that?
Calvin: Last-minute panic.