
by Donna Lamb
They rode up in the big glass elevator together. Jo bubbled with excitement, smiling and even giggling a bit. Richard looked glum.
"I don't understand why you didn't want to come up with m-me," said Jo.
"This is your thing, Melody's thing. The only reason I'm coming along for is to watch out for you. Make sure no one tries to take advantage of you."
"Hey," said Jo. "I'm underage, I can't legally sign a contract unless a judge says so."
"Well, some kinds of contract. But neither of us is a lawyer, so we don't want to depend on that." He took back the suit jacket he had loaned Jo in the frigid depths of the parking garage. Putting it on, he smiled a bit on finding it warm and smelling faintly of Un Mille et Une Fleurs, Jo's perfume.
The bell bonged and the elevator doors opened on a small foyer with a set of large glass doors labeled, "Tom K. Harmon, Talent Associates." A short hallway led off the foyer lined with doors, presumably to other offices on the same floor.
Richard pushed open the big glass door for Jo then followed her in. She went immediately to the reception desk and announced herself. "M-melody Jo Thierry and my manager, Richard Alexander, to see M-mr. Harmon." Richard managed not to trip on his jaw when she said that.
The receptionist, a decorative California blonde, made nice and invited them to sit, "for just a few minutes," while Mr. Harmon finished with another client. Jo took a seat in the area opposite the reception desk that had been decorated like an upscale family room, complete with a big screen HDTV, a chess table and a coffee bar.
Richard stood in front of her, blocking the receptionist's view and speaking in a low voice. "Since when am I your manager?"
She grinned. "Since I hired you five seconds ago, manager-chauffeur-bodyguard. Pays, uh, five thousand more a year than you're m-making now."
He stared at her. "Jo!"
"Please?" she looked at him with her big green eyes pleading.
"Jo!" he protested. "Ah, Jo! I can't be your manager, no, no. That would mean I signed contracts for you, did the negotiations." Those eyes, that almost-trembling lip. "I can't do that, I'm just a gear-head, driver..."
"And songwriter, and drummer in our b-band," she put in.
He held a hand up. "Please, Jo. No. We.... Just, no."
She pouted.
God, if she were still Joel, I'd smack him, thought Richard. "Personal assistant," he said, yielding a little ground.
She beamed at him and he had to smile back. "Jo, you're dangerous."
Giggling, she reached for his hand. "Shake, but you know, you just cost yourself that extra f-five thousand a year."
He took her hand gently and shook. "We'll talk about that later. But managers get a salary plus a percentage." He grinned, showing his dimples.
She pulled on his arm. "Sit," she said. "How big a p-percentage? And how m-much do agents get?"
He sighed. "We should have talked this over before. Agents get ten or fifteen percent, usually fifteen, sometimes more; managers, it varies a lot, depending." He sat beside her, turning so she had to let go of his hand.
"See? You know this stuff. How do you know this?"
"Uh, dating models, starlets, singers, you know." He shrugged. "Listening to them gripe about agents, managers, directors, photographers, producers, clients. Their hairdressers, mothers, dentists..."
She looked thoughtful. "Who knew you listened to them?" she said.
He laughed.
The receptionist called them, "Mr. Harmon will see you now." She started around the desk toward an inner door.
Richard stood and offered his hand to Jo. She took it, squeezed it, and stood. They followed the receptionist through the door into the inner offices, both of them still tingling a bit from that last contact.

Oh Richard!
He just can't see that he has the perfect qualifications to be Jo's manager - he cares about her. All that other stuff he thinks he doesn't know can be learned. These two need each other in more ways than one.
Jo is jumping the gun a bit here. I don't recall anything that suggests she has the financial assets to pay Richard what she offered. Earlier speculation that she may already be a recognizable celebrity don't wash because if she was, she wouldn't be sending portfolios to talent agencies.
I have this feeling of watching a balloon inflating, getting bigger and bigger every second. You know it's going to pop, but when it happens you still jump - maybe even squeak.
Sincerely,
Scott
Calvin: You can't just turn on creativity like a faucet. You have to be in the right mood.
Hobbes: What mood is that?
Calvin: Last-minute panic.
Sincerely,
Scott
Calvin: You can't just turn on creativity like a faucet. You have to be in the right mood.
Hobbes: What mood is that?
Calvin: Last-minute panic.
Crisis of Confidence
Richard is really torn here between loyalty, and more, to Jo, and his own knowledge of just what is own failings are. How will it all fall out? Guess we'll be finding out. ::grin::
We're a segment or two short of 40k words, here, honestly getting into novel territory. I never expected to keep this going so long and there are at least three major developments to go, maybe 15k more. Whew. ::smile::
Donna Lamb, flack
Donna Lamb, flack
You torture us!
Three more major plot developments and 15k to go? If I wasn't enjoying this so much I'd scream at you! Or at least a loud squeak!
Karen J.
"Being a girl is wonderful and to torture someone into that would be like the exact opposite of what it's like. I don’t know how anyone could act that way."
College Girl - poetheather
Squeaking of writing
I missed posting last night due to getting shanghai'd by some friends for a girl's night in, but now I know about a new nail salon. ::smile::
So, time to head back to the salt mines. ::grin::
Donna Lamb, flack
Donna Lamb, flack
Richard is seeing only the bad
Richard remembers too much of the bad side of stardom, from his recollections of previous date's gripes about their lives.
>>See? You know this stuff. How do you know this?"
"Uh, dating models, starlets, singers, you know." He shrugged. "Listening to them gripe about agents, managers, directors, photographers, producers, clients. Their hairdressers, mothers, dentists..."
She looked thoughtful. "Who knew you listened to them?" she said.
>>
I agree, because he cares, hell he loves Melody Jo he could be the perfect agent. The honestly, caring and trustworthyness is there. All the rest can be learned, as Scott points out.
Now who is the mysterious Tom K Harmon -- I thought he used to be the Milwaukee Brewers TV annoncer way back? Or is this name based on the football player/announcer and father of 80s heart trob actor Mark Harmon?
I think Melody Jo got another flash of her female life and simply knows she is rolling in fithy lucer, gelt, simolians and the like and that is why she suddenly offered him the job. I just hope that was the good guys prompting her.
A chess table in an agent's waiting room/reception area? Very odd. A metaphor for the *game* the DiD and the Clarence's backer are playing out? Melody/Jo is the white Queen. Is Richard a white knight or is pawn almost across the board and ... Ack! That would make him into a queen, not what Melody/Jo would like at all. M/J want's Richard and The Dick in one handsome, virile male piece.
John in Wauwatosa
P.S. I slept on it -- got my hair all wet and foamy -- but still can't send a latte by wire. Maybe the FTD people have an idea?
But you're not a scientist. Surely you believe in all this superstitious nonsense. (MAD Magazine)
Could be worse, could be raining. (Young Frankenstein)
But you're not a scientist. Surely you believe in all this superstitious nonsense. (MAD Magazine) Could be worse, could be raining. (Young Frankenstein)